Keifer You did a good job addressing the previous feedback, but I think you might have gotten confused on what the assignment was. I thought you were supposed to actually do a third elevator pitch. Based on this pitch I can't comment on your current product since you never talked about it... Anyway check out my blog here: http://blovejoyblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I understand you are not planning on changing anything, but you should of done an elevator pitch anyways. You might have not understood the assignment clearly. I think it is good that you did take the feedback about moving too much in a positive way. I have no idea what your product is since you did not do an elevator pitch so I cannot really give you any feedback. You should check out my blog at http://luissoto93.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Keifer, Good job adjusting your pitch based on feedback, but I don't think you knew what the assignment was, so I can't fault you for that. I don't really know what you were selling and perhaps you should take a look at the assignment again. Nevertheless, good luck with the edits. http://loganbrownuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Keifer
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job addressing the previous feedback, but I think you might have gotten confused on what the assignment was. I thought you were supposed to actually do a third elevator pitch. Based on this pitch I can't comment on your current product since you never talked about it...
Anyway check out my blog here: http://blovejoyblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I understand you are not planning on changing anything, but you should of done an elevator pitch anyways. You might have not understood the assignment clearly. I think it is good that you did take the feedback about moving too much in a positive way. I have no idea what your product is since you did not do an elevator pitch so I cannot really give you any feedback. You should check out my blog at http://luissoto93.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey Keifer,
ReplyDeleteGood job adjusting your pitch based on feedback, but I don't think you knew what the assignment was, so I can't fault you for that. I don't really know what you were selling and perhaps you should take a look at the assignment again. Nevertheless, good luck with the edits. http://loganbrownuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html